Grant Results & Honest Experience

I received grant funds to learn short story writing from a mentor and for feedback from Writer’s Odyssey. The grant was from the Northwest Minnesota Arts Council.

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Meeting all of the requirements for this has been a challenge.

The work was great. I ended up with over ten short stories this year ranging from 1500 words up to 6000 words each. Working with my mentor was a lot of fun.

However, ensuring I don’t have to repay funds for accidental missteps was a frustrating part of the process. There were so many little requirements that I didn’t understand or remember when I first read them.

Also, one person stated that a venue presentation was not necessary while others said it was. My issue with the venue isn’t just my introversion, it’s in that learning doesn’t always produce quality work that I am comfortable printing and sharing. It produces drafts… and drafts need a lot of work. I’d love to see them in the world someday, when they are ready. And not before.

However, I am grateful for the chance I had to learn from a fantastic mentor, Fran Wilde, who is an extremely accomplished and extremely kind person.

I may end up having to repay the grant because I missed a step, which is a bummer. Writers don’t make money unless they have been successful with publications, and that is much harder than it seems. This year I have had over twenty-five rejections and zero acceptances. Three stories are on submission now, but it might be months before I hear back from them. This is just a reality of being a writer.

Even if I end up having to pay the grant back, the experience was worthwhile. Fran and I looked at a lot of short stories, investigating and studying them. I wrote drafts and sent her pages for feedback. Each month we spoke on the phone for an hour or two. That was by far my favorite part and already I miss these super encouraging talks. She’d follow these with a note about the things we covered, learned, and discussed. While sometimes I wished the feedback was more extensive, getting to connect with a successful writer was such a neat experience. I also learned techniques to draft stories faster, learned the value of studying other stories to inform my own choices, and about the power of revision and feedback.

I have not received my feedback from the Writer’s Odyssey yet, but I sent three short stories to them with an expected feedback return day of October 11th, 2025. The stories are in the hands of my assigned reviewer already.

I’ve messaged the local library to see about giving a talk or talking to people there and may also set up a table at the arts and crafts sale Mid-November in my hometown.

I’ll try to update after the feedback comes from Odyssey.

Until then,

Thanks for reading!

New Writing Group

I joined a new writing group online, and am excited to see how that goes.
To enter, I had to do a writing prompt, it was suggested it be a poem. I’m not a poet by any means but like this one. So, here is it: 

Prompt: write what Pandemonium means to you in fifty words or less.

 


“Demons and Angels”

 

To some souls-Iscariot perhaps-

Pandemonium is the center where

Demon aggregates and attacks 

 

To some souls-on Earth discovered

Pandemonium is the mess and noise 

That sends them reeling-ears covered


Hands that flap-like angel’s wings

Bring them to where silence sings

April/May 2020

My life has been crazy. Who has not had lots of wild and crazy right now?

The loss of my stepdad (he was in hospice for the end of nano) has been very hard. And still feels surreal. I know it will only keep flooding back in and reminding all of us over and over again.

On a side note, I don’t like being crazy emotional. I hate crying.  So, I won’t go into the dramas of the other things that have been bothering me. Life. So, for writing life… (which is actually the least crazy part of my life now) …

For writing, Camp Nano was intense this year. I had 15k words into my rewritten draft two but needed this draft to be more like 65k. So I decided to shoot for the 50k more during Camp Nano.

So, now I am going to order “designer” books- a formatted fake cover and print-out sample book from Barnes and Noble Press for an editing copy, which is actually neat. 

I’m not anywhere near sending it out…It may not be ‘fixable’. But it is improving, from draft one. And I’m trying to learn the process and have fun 🙂
I also have been reading stuff about Story Grid, listening to their podcast too. It’s really analytical and a little psychological- I love it! I’m trying to see how the process will work for my book. I’ll have to update on that.

For now, I am going to try and focus on writing for fun, if time, wait for my printed draft two to arrive, read books I love if I can- and just focus on self-care. Please also keep my mom and family in your prayers during this time. Much love!

Until next time

Filtering…

Filtering.
It’s …. She saw the sparrow fly overhead vs. A sparrow flew overhead.
It’s… He realized he made a mistake; she wasn’t coming back.
Vs. He made a mistake; she wasn’t coming back.

(Using filters creates psychic distance- pulling your reader out of your story. )

It’s She held the teacup in her hand vs. She held the teacup. (Where else would she have it if she was holding it?)
Or She turned the doorknob  (OMIT) with her hand

Filtering is a TELL!!  … remember that old rule – Show don’t tell?
Or the frequently cited quote on this… “Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.” -Anton Chekhov

In first person, you don’t have to say What a pain, she thought. If you write what a pain, we know the MC is thinking it.
In third person limited, it’s the same. You don’t need to tell us the person is thinking or realizing, just put it into the narrative and reader will realize its your POV character (or narrator in omniscient) coloring the story.

To me, this concept has given me a lot to work on, but it made my writing clearer. I am still learning to use this idea and apply it to my writing. Maybe it can help you too??
Tip: google “writing and filter words” for a list of these. See what it can do for you!!!

Disclaimer: You don’t need to get rid of all the filters, just play and see which ones you need.

What I’ve Learned so Far…